Friday, November 23, 2007

final layout design

this was a thumbnail that became a monster, and it ate all my other thumbnails. you can still see them a little, underneath. that line in the middle? just where the frame used to be.. if you look close enough you can see how many times the frame was enlarged...

can you guys give me some feedback please? that would be fantabulous!

4 comments:

Kadi Fedoruk said...

love the idea of it HAYLEYYYYY!!

It is rather confusing though. There is no focal point, and with all the homes involved, nothing really sticks out.

I LOVE the little wharf in the middle. I would almost rather see the wharf and the house attached to it as a single layout, and do another one of a tree house town. It would be SOO atmospheric, kind of like some magical bayou.

I guess i would take apart this big layout and design three separate ones that all reflect back at this one.

I AM SO EXCITED TO DO MINE NOW.

I knew I had a blog of someone who did layouts like this! A layout artist for Tak, the videogame.

http://hog-heaven.blogspot.com/

Go to the bottom, there are more layouts there, especially the ones that pertain to what i think you're wanting to do?

Also, this is a GREAT blog.
http://avalanchesoftware.blogspot.com/
its the art blog of the avalanche gaming company, a couple of the artists listed on the side have PHENOMENAL painting styles.

Akali Singh said...

ur layout is wkd..i love it :D

JO REID said...

greta atmosphere! keep working on this idea

Emily Mullock said...

I think its really cool! I love the style the trees are drawn in. I agree that it's a little busy but I think you could solve a lot of it by picking sections of it and moving them more into the foreground or pushing them back. that way they're not competing so much. I want to go there!!!!